Clubbing WIP - Page 3 Final Pencils

The final(?) pencils of Page 3.

I was worried about the giant rhino monster's final lines. Would I be able to make all the poses look believable and good? Thank God, they do look alright, at the very least. I'm not entirely familiar with anatomy, something I'm realizing more and more that I need to fix, but I've been drawing people enough to make poses look reasonably legitimate... I guess. The digital stage is fine to fix things, but I dunno. I like to be able to fix major things like poses in the traditional stage.

Now... what I didn't anticipate was needing to fix Sheriff's pose. Jay's progression through the fight looks fine enough, but Sheriff's kind of moves awkwardly without much transition, especially from the second to third fight panel. I might even end up having to create an entirely new pose for him. I've drawn Overcast entirely in Photoshop, so it's not like that's a massive issue. Not like I'm on a strict deadline either. But you know. Heck, if I really need to, I'll just draw him on paper and composite him in Lucas-style.

Also, I like how in this style, Sheriff's chest is exaggerated to appear so large, his chest is bigger than Jay's.

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